free writing

In the weekend I went to Alana's b-day party it was so fun but one thing there was a boy who is really annoying and he even stayed the night because his big brother was having a b-day as well.
I came with cause she went to the christmas parade with me.When we arrived we went to bowlarama and I came 4th and pour old alana came last and we won out of the big kids yaaa.

my dialoge writing

"AHH". I'm in a oven", said Chocolatecupcake.
“and I am to said strawberry.
“Hey do you want to do a competion on who is the the last one to be eaten.

"yip".
“ I begs not being eaten first” .said strawberry.
Ahhh we are being eaten by the giants.
“ya I won” .said melted strawberry.

athletics day

It was finally athletics and after all that training it was finally time to shine.

I hopped into the bus.I was siting with Linda and Eden quit happily squashed.

Finally we hopped out of the bus and we walked down to our markeys .

It was a nice hot boiling day for athletics after what happened last year .

Our teacher for the day was Mrs Bradshaw .

My first activities was high jump I got over it the first time but the second time I just hit the bar so like usual I got a one ohhhh.

dialoge writing

"AHH" i'm in a oven", said chocolate cup cake.
And I am to .said melted strawberry.
"I begs not geting eaten first.said melted strawberry" .

"hey do you guys want to Cupcakes want to have a competition on whose the last one to be eaten".

"yip".

Ahh.

where being eaten. Yay I won .Said melted strawberry.

Prompt writing about when I was scared!

18/9/10

Every night when I go to sleep I always put my spotty blanket over my head. I do that because I think I am going to get kidnapped or get killed. It does get rather hot sometimes it feels like it is summer time under my blanket. I always sweat like I'm running in a marathon. And when I wake I hear some foot steps I wake and no body's their. I see shadows everywhere but it is just my vacuum cleaner. My dad always says that there is no boogie monsters in the cupboard. But I think there is. I just wish I wasn't scared any more but I still am. Sometimes I think there are monsters in the cupboard but there actually isn't my dad says that I'm the only monster in the house. In the morning I'm still alive and not kidnapped and I lived happily ever after until the other nights.

my free writting

on labour weekend I am going to toupo we are going to be staying there for 2 nights when we go to toupo we are going to do kayaking by our self we have to kayaks all ready one is purple and one is orange and yellow i am so excited but I will miss out on hannahs party

Show time

plan:

it was scary everyone could see me and I heard someone shouting out peoples names .

writing:

The big bright curtains went slowly up and I was so scared because I wasn't ready yet so I had to quickly put my head down.Then everyone started to clap and we started the song .It was exciting first until we did hehonore because my mum and dad could hear me singing the echo.Then it finished and I had to quickly changed into my Halloween custom I had to zip down their because it was nearly time to go on .