Quiddage writing

Quiddage is so cool. I just wish that I could pick a different topic next time cause my business got so boring after a while . Hardly anyone came to our business but Linda. We did very good but Linda gave half of the Snidges.

We got 700 on our first one but we started to get higher and higher yay.

The l@soupers are the most attraction in Quiddage and so are the Fizzders . hmmmmmm next time I might think about food. Food is the most attraction in QZealand.

free writing

In the weekend I went to Alana's b-day party it was so fun but one thing there was a boy who is really annoying and he even stayed the night because his big brother was having a b-day as well.
I came with cause she went to the christmas parade with me.When we arrived we went to bowlarama and I came 4th and pour old alana came last and we won out of the big kids yaaa.

my dialoge writing

"AHH". I'm in a oven", said Chocolatecupcake.
“and I am to said strawberry.
“Hey do you want to do a competion on who is the the last one to be eaten.

"yip".
“ I begs not being eaten first” .said strawberry.
Ahhh we are being eaten by the giants.
“ya I won” .said melted strawberry.

athletics day

It was finally athletics and after all that training it was finally time to shine.

I hopped into the bus.I was siting with Linda and Eden quit happily squashed.

Finally we hopped out of the bus and we walked down to our markeys .

It was a nice hot boiling day for athletics after what happened last year .

Our teacher for the day was Mrs Bradshaw .

My first activities was high jump I got over it the first time but the second time I just hit the bar so like usual I got a one ohhhh.

dialoge writing

"AHH" i'm in a oven", said chocolate cup cake.
And I am to .said melted strawberry.
"I begs not geting eaten first.said melted strawberry" .

"hey do you guys want to Cupcakes want to have a competition on whose the last one to be eaten".

"yip".

Ahh.

where being eaten. Yay I won .Said melted strawberry.

Prompt writing about when I was scared!

18/9/10

Every night when I go to sleep I always put my spotty blanket over my head. I do that because I think I am going to get kidnapped or get killed. It does get rather hot sometimes it feels like it is summer time under my blanket. I always sweat like I'm running in a marathon. And when I wake I hear some foot steps I wake and no body's their. I see shadows everywhere but it is just my vacuum cleaner. My dad always says that there is no boogie monsters in the cupboard. But I think there is. I just wish I wasn't scared any more but I still am. Sometimes I think there are monsters in the cupboard but there actually isn't my dad says that I'm the only monster in the house. In the morning I'm still alive and not kidnapped and I lived happily ever after until the other nights.

my free writting

on labour weekend I am going to toupo we are going to be staying there for 2 nights when we go to toupo we are going to do kayaking by our self we have to kayaks all ready one is purple and one is orange and yellow i am so excited but I will miss out on hannahs party

Show time

plan:

it was scary everyone could see me and I heard someone shouting out peoples names .

writing:

The big bright curtains went slowly up and I was so scared because I wasn't ready yet so I had to quickly put my head down.Then everyone started to clap and we started the song .It was exciting first until we did hehonore because my mum and dad could hear me singing the echo.Then it finished and I had to quickly changed into my Halloween custom I had to zip down their because it was nearly time to go on .

WALT:put it all together.

plan:
the big bang and crash that the lightning made and thunder . the wind that made me fall over . the lightning made me wake up . the rain that made me have a big rash the


writing:
In the middle of the night I had just fell asleep... until the lightning and thunder came and the
wind crashing on the walls .It was just a big nightmare .The Hali was disturbing me heaps and I only got 1 hour of sleep.And during the day I got thrown on the ground by the big bad wind . and that was a nightmare to and I woke up at 1.00 in the morning screaming because of the lightning ,thunder ,wind and Hali and I woke up about 10 times during the night . it is stileplustery now and freezing . During that I heard a big bang and that was my brothers bird it died it was very sad then it was the morning it had all stopped.

WALT:make tired writing come to life

In the holidays I went to the zoo at Auckland

1.In the holidays the girl went to the amazing zoo at the big town Auckland
2.In the holidays I went to the zoo on tricycle at Auckland
3.It was the holidays and I went to the Auckland zoo to see the amazing tigers
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today we had jump jam and we had to pull a face for the hole time and imlucky that I didnt have to stay in a morning tea time cause ive got tepowi practice

my free writing about the dance

today we are having dance with dean I am so excited but a bit scared because I dont get the moves right but ill try my best at least I will get to do the next part and I hope that we dont have to do the jump jam thing so then I wont get tired and swettey now I wonder when the alarms is going togo off ok 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3and ahalf 2 and ahalf ok its gone of now so bye

today we started of the morning the morning when suddenley someone was sick and i never knew she was going to be sick do you want to know who it was it was poor old grace we didnt know what was wrong for her until her freind maddy told us that she was sick and she was spuing up so by it is finished

my free writing

26/8/10

today tc waS back we had thomas's mum come to talk to us about reciclying i was fun because we got run out to see the rubish truck zoom bye when it was picking up rubish we could here it beeping when it was reversing and we got to see where the trucks were going it was awesome now im very confident about the basic facts tests it will probably be really easy for me unlse i pick the hardest ones first not the easy one

my free writing

25/8/10



today we have mrs walker and we played some games but first she called the roll like all teachers do and did the the quiz like tc does it she did fittness like mr mccullum normaly does when he teaches but she doesent do that much hard things like mr mccullum does shes better mr cause shes fun not like mr mccullum dont tell him that he might get grumpy and I wounder what tcs doing today maybe doing work wi'll we get to do fun things

Free writing

todays thing was so cool althogh some of the ones we lost that wsa anyoying i dont know what to write although i need to go to the loo im pusting badly i wish this five minutes was over im going bright red now every 1 will be loooking at meeeeeee now ok i really need to go to the toliet now i need the thinggy to go now please please please please please ok its going to go now no how about now i can hear these farting noises

my free writing

in the weekend I went to the buliding shops igt WAS BLORING all i had to do is try not to fight with my anyoing brother it was fun when he was at his scout thingy ma bob i was the only child and i got to make chocolate afghans and my dad was acting like a child cousu he wanted the bowl and I got it first and he started afight

my free writing

17/8/10
our five minutes stards now said tc bhvhdfgssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssi like banna cake i like banna cake hello ding dong ding ding dong hello said the creppy ladie how are u today im good how are u today i like to eat i lkie to eat apples and bannas i love HUORESE I LIKE HORSES ILKIE HORSES THIS IS BORING HOOOOOOERRRRRRIIIIINNGGGGGGG BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRINNNNNNNNNNNG MY FAVORITE FOOD IS CHOCOLATE

my play

27/7/10

the best day at school

By Natalya Bradey

characters

Angel (main character/student)

Samantha(student /best friend)

Mr Pandy(teacher)

sandy (shy girl)

Scene: Angel is walking to school with her best friend Samantha .They are having a little conversation .Then they get to school.

Angel: ( talking to Samantha) So what did you do in the weekend ?

Samantha: Nothing much I only went to tepapa in Wellington.(walking and talking to Angel

Angel : well I went to the supermarket and I got this dress but its actually a Robe.

Samantha: ohhhhhhhhhhhh we're at school now !(they walk in Mr pandy greets them).

Mr pandy: hello puppets how are you today?(they both say good)

(lucy walks in )
Lucy :Hi

Angel : Hi sandy (sandy waves )

Mr pandy: good morning class(class says hello)
(Mr pandy gives them some presents)
(Mr pandy gives them some hats)
(angel gets a watch)
Angel:thank you this is the best day ever

WALT:to use allitaration

30/6/10
1.The music was loud.She felt like dancing .
The music extremely loud .And the excitement made her dance .
2.The waves where high.The boat was small .
That wave was so so so high .The boat was silently sinking because of the wave .
3.there was 30 seconds to go .He was 50 meters from the goal .
there was only 30 seconds to go .He was originally 50 meters away from the goal.
4.Jane wasn't allowed to join their game.
Jane wasn't allowed to join their big bouncy game.

The three black monkeys

27\4\10

On a bright sunny day in the jungle there lived three black monkeys.They weren't