Sunday, September 19, 2010

WALT:put it all together.

plan:
the big bang and crash that the lightning made and thunder . the wind that made me fall over . the lightning made me wake up . the rain that made me have a big rash the


writing:
In the middle of the night I had just fell asleep... until the lightning and thunder came and the
wind crashing on the walls .It was just a big nightmare .The Hali was disturbing me heaps and I only got 1 hour of sleep.And during the day I got thrown on the ground by the big bad wind . and that was a nightmare to and I woke up at 1.00 in the morning screaming because of the lightning ,thunder ,wind and Hali and I woke up about 10 times during the night . it is stileplustery now and freezing . During that I heard a big bang and that was my brothers bird it died it was very sad then it was the morning it had all stopped.

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Hi my name is Natalya I am in lc13. I play the drums in my own time. I go to Riverdale school. I am a year six.In a few more terms.The intermediste that I might be going to is monrad intermediate.I have two birds 1 dog and 1 brother A.K.A Pig.