WALT:to use allitaration

30/6/10
1.The music was loud.She felt like dancing .
The music extremely loud .And the excitement made her dance .
2.The waves where high.The boat was small .
That wave was so so so high .The boat was silently sinking because of the wave .
3.there was 30 seconds to go .He was 50 meters from the goal .
there was only 30 seconds to go .He was originally 50 meters away from the goal.
4.Jane wasn't allowed to join their game.
Jane wasn't allowed to join their big bouncy game.