Show time

plan:

it was scary everyone could see me and I heard someone shouting out peoples names .

writing:

The big bright curtains went slowly up and I was so scared because I wasn't ready yet so I had to quickly put my head down.Then everyone started to clap and we started the song .It was exciting first until we did hehonore because my mum and dad could hear me singing the echo.Then it finished and I had to quickly changed into my Halloween custom I had to zip down their because it was nearly time to go on .

WALT:put it all together.

plan:
the big bang and crash that the lightning made and thunder . the wind that made me fall over . the lightning made me wake up . the rain that made me have a big rash the


writing:
In the middle of the night I had just fell asleep... until the lightning and thunder came and the
wind crashing on the walls .It was just a big nightmare .The Hali was disturbing me heaps and I only got 1 hour of sleep.And during the day I got thrown on the ground by the big bad wind . and that was a nightmare to and I woke up at 1.00 in the morning screaming because of the lightning ,thunder ,wind and Hali and I woke up about 10 times during the night . it is stileplustery now and freezing . During that I heard a big bang and that was my brothers bird it died it was very sad then it was the morning it had all stopped.

WALT:make tired writing come to life

In the holidays I went to the zoo at Auckland

1.In the holidays the girl went to the amazing zoo at the big town Auckland
2.In the holidays I went to the zoo on tricycle at Auckland
3.It was the holidays and I went to the Auckland zoo to see the amazing tigers
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today we had jump jam and we had to pull a face for the hole time and imlucky that I didnt have to stay in a morning tea time cause ive got tepowi practice

my free writing about the dance

today we are having dance with dean I am so excited but a bit scared because I dont get the moves right but ill try my best at least I will get to do the next part and I hope that we dont have to do the jump jam thing so then I wont get tired and swettey now I wonder when the alarms is going togo off ok 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3and ahalf 2 and ahalf ok its gone of now so bye